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- banktooth12 November 2005
- formerly shades of blue November 2005
- giggleguy November 2005
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- The End Has No Jen November 2005
- thephantommilk November 2005
oh i wrote a prety poem
“What a Tragedy”
How long is forever and
when is never?
What happens if your alone
And you die?
Will someone ever find you,
or will time simply deny you
the privilege of being left alone?
I hear someone’s crying
and inside I am still dying.
Do me a favor and
don’t answer the phone,
because on the other end
their waiting
for someone who is still saying
how sad it is and
what a tragedy.
I’ll shut them up.
Real quick.
This clock has stopped
and will not tick.
Lucky us,
Love will set us free.
yea im super self concious about my poems..
How long is forever and
when is never?
What happens if your alone
And you die?
Will someone ever find you,
or will time simply deny you
the privilege of being left alone?
I hear someone’s crying
and inside I am still dying.
Do me a favor and
don’t answer the phone,
because on the other end
their waiting
for someone who is still saying
how sad it is and
what a tragedy.
I’ll shut them up.
Real quick.
This clock has stopped
and will not tick.
Lucky us,
Love will set us free.
yea im super self concious about my poems..
Comments
i like it, at least.
How long is forever and
when is never?
What happens if you're alone
And you die?
Will someone ever find you,
or will time simply deny you
the privilege of being left alone?
I hear someone’s crying
and inside I am still dying.
Do me a favor and
don’t answer the phone,
because on the other end
they're waiting
for someone who is still saying
how sad it is and
what a tragedy.
I’ll shut them up.
Real quick. (proper grammer would be "really quickly")
This clock has stopped
and will not tick.
Lucky us,
Love will set us free.
yea im super self concious about my poems..
Tragedy! when the feelings gonge and you cant move on...
i had a bad day with people.
i really do hope i kill them. i hope i do.
i dont cair what happens..
some people deserve it.
hypocryts.
"abyss"
Im sitting in a room of dark
Doors locked and shut tight.
Im not as sad as i am scared.
The future is frightening.
Im staring into the endless abyss
of the sky.
Millions of questions
buzzing around my head.
What i truely think of life
scares people.
If I told them,
they would think me crazy.
Lying on the floor
staring at the darkness of the ceiling.
I have come to the conclusion
that their is no answer.
To life, to everything.
It is as simple as that.
Life is what you make it.
yes im especially proud of this one.
i dont know where i got the courage to post this.
oo i trust u all. ^^
the once was a message board of cools
where there was a couple of fools
then one day
they went gay
not that theres anything wrong with that
Tragedy! when the feelings gonge and you cant move on...
OMG STEPS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I was SO obsessed with them in 7th grade, after I came back from Australia.
And that was a quite lovely poem, dear. I understand you- I wrote a whole mess of poetry/song lyrics back in my senior year when I was going through a lot of shit. It's a really good way to get stuff out of your system. It's an outlet.
And in the summer when I'm angry, I slam tennis balls at boards. That really lets out my anger, especially if I want to hit someone.
then smile and walk away!
then smile and walk away!
you? ...no.
..i just can't imagine you being mean.