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A new poem from me

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edited November -1 in General Discussion
It isn't quite finished as of this moment, though I would like some feedback on it.

I wrote this about half an hour ago when I accidentally said something that rhymed on msn to my friend Shanyn

"My Sweater"

How about we go to the beach on thursday?
If it gets cold on that day
I will lend you my sweater, is that ok?
and if you lose my sweater on that day
I will hug you for a day, ok?
that will surely make you pay.

And if you were to steal my sweater
I would love to do no better
than put a feather in my hat
and flap my wings, just like a bat
and that should be the end of that.

Now if you got my sweater wet
I would have to buy a jet
and fly across the world to meet a vet
and buy some wool to make a new sweater, which isn't wet.

Now it is time to go to the beach for the day
do you think it will be cold out today?
I'll take my sweater, just in case
maybe we'll have a picnic, I'll take my suitcase
why don't we sit down, and embrace
the sunlight that shines on our face
I don't think we will need that sweater in my suitcase...

Not finished but yeah please post your comments

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